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[Snowball's Chance]

Nice

It was good though collision could have been better.
I've read your reply to starrykid and I have to say that this is a incredibly good for a first platformer.

jayinhar responds:

Thanks! The platform level is actually just a modified version of the sliding levels (I cheated a bit and just added gravity. Didn't work out as smoothly as I expected at first, though.)

[Game, Etc Tutorial]

Avarage

Could have coverd some more ground.
Explaining code is learning, copy and paste isn't.

[3d chair]

Not really yours.

If you don't want all the crap below, scroll to 'complication'.
It's a chair and a mouse orientated camera.
You're actually trying to get this flash through the portal by showing a simply made object using an engine you didn't make. You only made the chair in a 3D program (i guess) and turned it into flash, EVERYBODY CAN DO THAT.
If this were a tutorial ABOUT the engine and a-like then I'd find it helpfull and rated it well.

Complication:
You're using an engine which is not yours
You made a too simple object.
Lack interactivity.

BTW:
You should have done a car even though it'd have to be low poly.

chinchang457 responds:

you are wrong.
it is made completely in flash using a slice engine made in flash too.

[Modern Tactics]

Good but...

my weapons wouldn't unlock, Rank 13 and i couldn't even use the MP5 Secondary weapon.

[-Telepath RPG Chapter 2-]

:'(

Savegame won't load... I press like hell but it won't load.
Still a nice game though.

[The Visitor]

WOW

The three endings in the last scene:
1. Do nothing
2. Close the door, put the toilet paper in the toilet, flush it, fill the sing, open the closet door, grab the hairdryer, plug it in and... play?
3. Close the door, put the toilet paper in the toilet, flush it, fill the sing, open the closet door, grab the hairdryer, plug it in, fill the other sink, electrocute THE OTHER sink, grab the gun, and shoot (click the gun).

[Z Ball X]

Great game

Great game.
Max Combo: 117
Level: 101
Rank: Wastoid

After reaching lvl 101, I got bored.
How I got a lvl that high?
Train, kick the ball up constantly and keep it in the air.
Eventually, @ combo 40 or so, you can use all your skills unlimited.
Or at least, that was my luck.
With unlimited power, you can blast your opponents to oblivion.

A very nice game, good sound, great graphics and an amazing engine.

[F2Jam v2 Beta]

Fun game

I think this all is quite hard to script, but it seems all has come together. It is quite addictive, but often i had my hands possition wrong, pressing the A button, fixed that later on in the options though.
I think this is a really good game, well done.

XceeD responds:

lol xD! My friend did the same thing you did :P

Thanks for the review :D!

[Detailed RPG Tutorial]

Good

Finaly a walk-around script without bugs.
And all was very detailed (0.0).
It really helped.

[Stolen Flash Tutorial]

Good

You know, you can also use the same system to make "only at" movies and games.
Script:

LC = new LocalConnection();
if(LC.domain() == "Only at site name here") {
_root.gotoAndStop ("No");
} else {
Stop();
}

The movieclip <instance name> should be "stolen".
Make the first frame totally black and enter the script into the first frame. Give the second frame a name, "No".
Make the second frame blank so we can still view it.
It is just a bit simpler then yours and just a bit better then yours.
Because in your version you can still right-click and press play.
This doesn't work for movieclips, so he might still hear it but can't see it.